On Sun 2021-12-12 19:48:17 -0800, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > Hi dkg, > > On Tue, Dec 07, 2021 at 03:11:56PM +0200, Daniel Kahn Gillmor wrote: >> I appreciate your catching these unexpanded acronyms. I am happy to add >> expansions for them, or maybe just outbound references if that seems >> appropriate. >> >> "OCSP" and "CRL" appear in the draft in reference to certificate >> indicators, meaning specific X.509 extensions; for OCSP i would refer to >> id-ad-ocsp in the Authority Information Access X.509 extension >> (i.e., §4.2.2.1 of RFC 5280), and for CRL i would refer to the CRL >> Distribution Points X.509 extension (i.e., §4.2.1.13 of RFC 5280). >> >> For "PEM encoding" I would add an informative reference to RFC 7468, >> where §5 describes certificates and §10 describes private keys. >> >> Would that be a useful set of changes to the document? > > IMHO, yes. OK, i just uploaded draft-ietf-lamps-samples-06 with these changes and Roman's edits, but i somehow goofed and modified the PKCS#12 files from how they were in -05. I've subsequently uploaded -07 with the PKCS#12 restored to how it was in -05, as you can see here: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-lamps-samples-05&url2=draft-ietf-lamps-samples-07 I note that there is also a change in how the text versions are rendered, because the surrounding quotation marks have been dropped as of xml2rfc version 3.7 (see https://trac.ietf.org/trac/xml2rfc/ticket/600) -- the underlying xml source has no changes for those elements. I'd have preferred the text version to actually do the quote-wrapping of the substrings, but not enough to introduce quotation marks into the HTML version, which i think is a cleaner way to read these samples anyway (easier to extract the sourcecode blobs, at any rate). So, I think this addresses all of the outstanding requests that i've seen about this draft. If there's anything else i can do to help move this along, please let me know. --dkg
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