Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-samples-05

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Hi dkg,

On Tue, Dec 07, 2021 at 03:11:56PM +0200, Daniel Kahn Gillmor wrote:
> I appreciate your catching these unexpanded acronyms.  I am happy to add
> expansions for them, or maybe just outbound references if that seems
> appropriate.
> 
> "OCSP" and "CRL" appear in the draft in reference to certificate
> indicators, meaning specific X.509 extensions; for OCSP i would refer to
> id-ad-ocsp in the Authority Information Access X.509 extension
> (i.e., §4.2.2.1 of RFC 5280), and for CRL i would refer to the CRL
> Distribution Points X.509 extension (i.e., §4.2.1.13 of RFC 5280).
> 
> For "PEM encoding" I would add an informative reference to RFC 7468,
> where §5 describes certificates and §10 describes private keys.
> 
> Would that be a useful set of changes to the document?

IMHO, yes.

Thanks,

Ben

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