[Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-samples-05

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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-samples-05
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2021-11-16
IETF LC End Date: 2021-11-26
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: A well written document ready for publication

Major issues:None

Minor issues:None

Nits/editorial comments:
The following terms were used without prior definition in the text: PEM, OCSP,
CRL - they are well known in the security community, but not in the RFC Editor
list of well known terms not needing expansion on first use.

Sections 11 and 12 have no content and can be removed.



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