> > But I'm not fully convince we really need to be that strict about the > > choice of words here. > > > > Apart from these, I don't see any further edits needed. > > I'd say we should try to be consistent but not at the cost of making > the language sound incredibly awkward in context. I'd say go ahead and > do it as best you can, we can always tweak it later :) Thanks! OK, I tried to improve the clarity while still keeping the language natural. Patches welcome, of course :) These are my edits: https://fedoraproject.org/w/index.php?title=Fedora_24_Beta_Release_Criteria&diff=433795&oldid=427038 https://fedoraproject.org/w/index.php?title=Fedora_24_Alpha_Release_Criteria&diff=433796&oldid=432067 https://fedoraproject.org/w/index.php?title=QA%3ASOP_blocker_bug_process&diff=433797&oldid=430030 -- test mailing list test@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: http://lists.fedoraproject.org/admin/lists/test@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
