Review of gallery for 12-20-03

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1.  D.L. Shipman - "Danaus plexippus Monarch Butterfly"

Overall good exposure and color, would be nice to see both wings, as it is,
the left wing seems to stick out of the picture.

2.  Jim Snarksi - "Airborne"

Nice shot of smiling young lady on a swing.  Your shadows are a bit blocked
and the photo could stand to be a bit lighter over all.  The focus is also
soft., although I know it's tough to get tack-sharp focus on a moving
target.  Other than that I like it, oh yes, there's a bit too much negative
space on the bottom.

3.  Pablo Coronel - "Woodscape"

Difficult to say what this actually is, although it is interesting.  I like
the pattern, is it supposed to be wood grain?  Maybe sharpening would help.
It looks like you've scanned in scratches, although they may be part of the
picture.  Would like a little more explanation on what you intended.

4.  Per Ofverbeck - "Tragopogon (?)"

Nice sharp image, and I like the contrast between the open flower and the
bud.  Too much useless negative space on the left and right (the out of
focus bud doesn't add anything), cropping would help.

5.  Jim "Duck" Davis - "Gulls on Posts"

Beautiful photo, but obviously these birds are drugged.  I can never get
gulls to pose that well.  Nice sharp focus and color.  I like the diagonal
arrangement of the posts, maybe cropping a little off the bottom would
enforcement that a little more.

6.  Shawna Hanel - "Santa Please"

I do like this one.  It's a nice, simple composition with a good line;
however, cropping the out of focus beads in the bottom 1/3 would improve it
markedly.

7.  Laurenz Bobke - "Sunset in the Summer Place"

Nice sunset, but not really exciting.  You need a point of interest.

8.  C.J.R. Strevens - "The shape of things to come"

A documentary shot of a building site.  Good verticals, composition and
exposure.  Other than that it doesn't do a lot for me other than make me
wonder, as you do, whether these will ultimately become just more inner city
slums.

9.  Pini Vollach - "Forbidden Love"

Why is it forbidden?  Looks like you shot it with a "squirrel cam"  I guess
your unorthodox composition does give it a little more interest.  Was the
out of focus foreground also part of your plan?

10. Bill Ellis - "Untitiled"

When I first looked at this photo I saw only the church, it took a few
seconds to realize that the overhead cables belonged to a railyard.  Too
contrasty, and your shadows are blocked.  It's hard to decide what your
point of interest is.  Is it the church, or the people on the platform
waiting for the train?  Selective focus and cropping would have helped.

9.  Scott Thurmond - "Lost in thought?"

Actually this is Uncle Fred, not Aunt Zelda.  Older married couples do seem
to look a lot alike.

10.   W.R. Gill - "Light rain on the duck pond"

I like the composition.  It appears to be slightly out of focus though,
maybe that's because it's a small image or, perhaps, because of the rain.

Favorite this week would have to be Jim "Duck" Davis's , "Gulls on Posts."
Thanks everyone and Merry Christmas, Happy Hanukkah and Happy New Year.  I'm
outta here!  


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