Thanks Jouni. Taken care of this feedback in latest version. > -----Original Message----- > From: Jouni Korhonen via Datatracker [mailto:noreply@xxxxxxxx] > Sent: Sunday, March 31, 2019 1:18 PM > To: ops-dir@xxxxxxxx > Cc: ietf@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags.all@xxxxxxxx; > bess@xxxxxxxx > Subject: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07 > > Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen > Review result: Ready > > I read the document and think it is ready. IDNits warnings and comments are > easily/automatically fixed when new version is submitted. > > I only have few editorial nits/suggestions. > * Section 5.1 says "Assuming the below specified network topology.." while it > could also use an exact reference to Figure 1. * Section 5 is written so that it > assumed the reader has already read Section 6. Maybe swapping Sections 5 > and > 6 order would make sense?
