--On Saturday, August 8, 2020 22:42 -0400 "Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > While full coordiantion probably needs something akin to RSE > involvement, it seems to me that it would be a useful step if > the IETF could at least figure out how to create a working > list along the lines of what Joe Touch posted. (Here are some > words. Here are some other words that you could / should / > might / ... consider using in place of them.) > > Having such a list with some resemblance of IETF rough > consensus that following it is a good idea would help us move > forward without getting bogged down in either "whose job is a > formal decision?" or "when will there be an RSE?". > > Such a list would, it seems to me, help genart reviewers at > least keep the question in mind. Yes, but that takes me/us back to suggestions made weeks ago, i.e., (i) We treat this IESG statement and the underlying I-D as having done a great job of increasing the community's sensitivity to the issues of choices of language, largely independent or how those issues are defined. (ii) We conclude that we really don't need to get to an official vocabulary, especially an official negative or discouraged vocabulary/ work list. (iii) With the community's new-found sensitivity, we encourage document reviewers, especially within WGs in addition to IETF LC (or any particular review team) to spot unfortunate language as they read through documents. When should language is spotted (again, preferably early in the document life cycle) it should lead to discussions with authors about whether the language is appropriate and possible alternative. Reviews during IETF Last Call (or later) and public comments on the language should be viewed as a last resort although possibly a necessary one. john