Re: [Magazine] Pending review: "Fedora teaches future makers in school"

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On Thu, May 05, 2016 at 04:16:18PM +0530, beta tester wrote:
> Hey don't mind i wanted a small help is there any style guide or any
> great guidelines. That can be followed normally when writing
> articles.

I've been thinking about doing that, but general guidelines for good
writing apply universally.  Strunk and White is a good place to start.
Here are some of my observations where we can improve writing in the
Magazine:

* Avoid passive voice, which unnecessarily lengthens sentences and is
  harder to read.

  NOT AS GOOD:  A new release of the Firefox package was made by the
  maintainers last week.
  BETTER:  Maintainers made a new Firefox release last week.

* Avoid gerunds -- words that end with "-ing."  They are often signs
  of a weak or passive voice, and they decrease readability.
  Reformulate the sentence.

  NOT AS GOOD: The resolution is aiming to decrease the time between
  security updates.
  BETTER: The resolution aims to decrease the time between security
  updates.

* Shorter sentences are easier to read.  Avoid long compound sentences
  where possible.

* Shorter words are easier to read.  Avoid big words where a smaller
  one is just as effective.

* Brevity is great, but clarity is fabulous.

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