On 05/03/2016 04:29 PM, Sylvia Sánchez wrote: > > Hi! > Why are separated "children, young adults and students" as if students > were another age? Shouldn't be "professors and students, either > children, teens or young adults"? Or something like that? > > > Cheers, > Sylvia > Hey Sylvia, good catch. That does sound a little bit weird. I edited in your suggestion since that sounds nicer. Thanks for the tip! > > > On 3 May 2016 at 16:55, beta tester <khanolkardilip@xxxxxxxxx > <mailto:khanolkardilip@xxxxxxxxx>> wrote: > > The article is nicely written and quiet informative. Thanks for your > contribution. > > Regards, > Dilip Khanolkar > +919833018122 <tel:%2B919833018122> > > On 03-May-2016 9:35 PM, "Sylvia Sánchez" <lailahfsf@xxxxxxxxx > <mailto:lailahfsf@xxxxxxxxx>> wrote: > > I'm reading, looks very nice. Thanks for the article! > > On 3 May 2016 at 12:45, Brian Monroe <briancmonroe@xxxxxxxxx > <mailto:briancmonroe@xxxxxxxxx>> wrote: > > Small Thing: The title should be capitalized properly: > "Fedora Teaches Future Makers in School" > Hey Brian, thanks for the feedback. Usually for styling in the articles on the Magazine, we only capitalize proper nouns. I'm sure there's a rule in journalism about what is actually appropriate, but this is the format we generally follow on the Magazine. Although, this article title does come off a little bit "newsier" so maybe it would make more sense. Not a bad idea to clarify this for this and future articles in our meeting today. > I only had time to give it a brief scan, but everything else > looked pretty good. > > On Tue, May 3, 2016 at 8:28 AM Justin W. Flory > <jflory7@xxxxxxxxx <mailto:jflory7@xxxxxxxxx>> wrote: > > Hi all, > > After too long of a time, I finally exported the > interview with Jonathan > Dieter into a Magazine draft, "Fedora teaches future > makers in school". > If you have a moment, please take some time to review > this draft (my > biggest concern for this is formatting for the interview). > > > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=12806&preview=1&_ppp=137a3117cc > > Thanks all! > Thanks for the feedback! I have some feedback from jdieter to incorporate soon, and once it's in, I think this will be ready to publish. -- Cheers, Justin W. Flory jflory7@xxxxxxxxx
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