https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=972256 Bug ID: 972256 Summary: The release notes on the website have grammar errors, missing words. Not all my corrections were implemented. Product: Fedora Documentation Version: devel Component: release-notes Severity: medium Priority: unspecified Assignee: relnotes@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Reporter: lsatenstein@xxxxxxxxx QA Contact: docs-qa@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx CC: oglesbyzm@xxxxxxxxx, relnotes@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, wb8rcr@xxxxxxxx Created attachment 758390 --> https://bugzilla.redhat.com/attachment.cgi?id=758390&action=edit Corrected Fedora 19 release notes. Description of problem: I worked on the draft of the release notes, pointed out via markups, errors in grammer, missing words and miss spellings. It was decided to not correct some of the errors and publish. I have prepared a document which highlights the errors, and most of all, corrects an omission in an Appendix A3. My original release notes submission was done at end-April. Hereto this bug is an update to the release notes. I would use the collaboration features of libreoffice, but not everyone knows how to use it. Therefore I have resorted to coloring text yellow to show removals, red to show insertions and to also insert words that were omitted. I also asked some questions as to what the author was trying to say. We all, myself included are guilty of omitting words when we write our first draft. Because we think while we write, a good proof read of the document is needed. So I am reporting 25+ corrections to the release notes shown on the website. The document with the corrections is attached. I am also very disappointed that the proofreading effort was not recognized. In that regard, I included an additional Appendix A3. Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable): Fedora 19 Release notes. How reproducible: Steps to Reproduce: 1. 2. 3. Actual results: Expected results: Additional info: -- You are receiving this mail because: You are on the CC list for the bug. You are the assignee for the bug. -- relnotes-content mailing list relnotes-content@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/relnotes-content
