Hello all, I wrote the information I could find. I would gladly add more in the beginning if I knew *what* to add. It's hard to find information. I'll search a bit more and see if I can find anything. But it's not that I didn't want to put it, is that I didn't find it. Also, I was asked to short it, and I was doing so. Kind regards, Lailah On Mon, 10 Feb 2020 at 01:40, Paul Frields <stickster@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > I've looked at this article to edit, and I'm just not sure how to start. > The article comes off as a random assortment of facts without a clear flow. > There's nothing in it about how Fedora Core came out of Red Hat Linux, or > why. For an article with "origin" in the title, this seems to me a glaring > absence. As is, I don't feel comfortable publishing this without rewriting > it entirely. > > Could you make another go at this article? I would encourage you to start > by including much more in the first section, before you start throwing > factoids about naming or timeline at the reader. > > Paul > > On Thu, Jan 30, 2020 at 2:41 PM Silvia Sánchez <bhkohane@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > >> Hello all, >> >> Following Pat's suggestions, I trimmed Matthew's paragraphs and fixed the >> issues about Firefox and versions. >> Here is the link: >> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=29794&preview=1&_ppp=bd44f59fcf >> >> Cheers, >> Silvia >> FAS: Lailah >> >> >> >> On Tue, 28 Jan 2020 at 16:25, Silvia Sánchez <bhkohane@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: >> >> > >> > Hello all, >> > >> > I'll check the bit about Firefox, I didn't realise there was some sort >> of >> > confusion, I'll fix it. >> > I'll trim Matthew's sections to make them easier to read and less >> > repetitious. Thanks for pointing it out. >> > >> > Kind regards, >> > Silvia >> > FAS: Lailah >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > On Mon, 27 Jan 2020 at 18:38, pmkellly@xxxxxxxxxxxx < >> pmkellly@xxxxxxxxxxxx> >> > wrote: >> > >> >> Silvia, >> >> >> >> There seem to be two places where Firefox is "first" (default and >> >> shipped) in the evolution section. >> >> >> >> The Matthew Miller sections seems a bit repetitious. Perhaps shorten it >> >> to include the key quotes that add to the prior sections rather than >> >> repeating them. >> >> >> >> >> >> Have a Great Day! >> >> >> >> Pat (tablepc) >> >> >> >> >> >> On 1/27/20 10:14 AM, Silvia Sánchez wrote: >> >> > Hello all, >> >> > >> >> > Sorry for being so late with this article, too many things in the >> way. >> >> Now >> >> > about the changes you suggested, Matthew... I added them all except >> the >> >> > bit about code names because that's something I'm planning to >> explain in >> >> > detail when I get to that part of Fedora's history. This article >> >> should be >> >> > the beginning/introduction to Fedora with a focus on the early years. >> >> Or >> >> > that's how I planned it. >> >> > Please, review the article and let me know if there's anything else >> that >> >> > needs change. Also, I'd like to know who will take care of the >> banner >> >> > image. >> >> > >> >> > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=29794&preview=1&_ppp=51d8922c6d >> >> > >> >> > Kind regards, >> >> > Silvia >> >> > FAS: Lailah >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > On Tue, 14 Jan 2020 at 19:46, Matthew Miller < >> mattdm@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> >> >> > wrote: >> >> > >> >> >> On Tue, Jan 07, 2020 at 09:19:47AM +0300, Silvia Sánchez wrote: >> >> >>> It's me again, sorry for the delay. I added images and checked the >> >> text >> >> >>> again, please review it. >> >> >> >> >> >> Some comments: >> >> >> >> >> >> The lacrosse hat story is the official one -- I think that should go >> >> first. >> >> >> I don't think the "red hat hacker" association was intended. (In >> fact, >> >> I'm >> >> >> not even sure that that *was* a term in the 1990s, although "black >> >> hat" and >> >> >> "white hat" certainly were.) >> >> >> >> >> >> On "timeline core and extras", I would like to be careful with the >> >> >> distinction between "Red Hat" and "community" and the story around >> >> that. >> >> >> I know you quote me explaining it below :) but it's a big deal so >> I'd >> >> like >> >> >> the introduction to be right too. >> >> >> >> >> >> Further down... it might be nice to explain that we dropped the >> >> codenames >> >> >> because it became increasingly difficult to find names that fit our >> >> process >> >> >> and could be approved by legal. 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