I've looked at this article to edit, and I'm just not sure how to start. The article comes off as a random assortment of facts without a clear flow. There's nothing in it about how Fedora Core came out of Red Hat Linux, or why. For an article with "origin" in the title, this seems to me a glaring absence. As is, I don't feel comfortable publishing this without rewriting it entirely. Could you make another go at this article? I would encourage you to start by including much more in the first section, before you start throwing factoids about naming or timeline at the reader. Paul On Thu, Jan 30, 2020 at 2:41 PM Silvia Sánchez <bhkohane@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Hello all, > > Following Pat's suggestions, I trimmed Matthew's paragraphs and fixed the > issues about Firefox and versions. > Here is the link: > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=29794&preview=1&_ppp=bd44f59fcf > > Cheers, > Silvia > FAS: Lailah > > > > On Tue, 28 Jan 2020 at 16:25, Silvia Sánchez <bhkohane@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > > > > Hello all, > > > > I'll check the bit about Firefox, I didn't realise there was some sort of > > confusion, I'll fix it. > > I'll trim Matthew's sections to make them easier to read and less > > repetitious. Thanks for pointing it out. > > > > Kind regards, > > Silvia > > FAS: Lailah > > > > > > > > > > > > On Mon, 27 Jan 2020 at 18:38, pmkellly@xxxxxxxxxxxx < > pmkellly@xxxxxxxxxxxx> > > wrote: > > > >> Silvia, > >> > >> There seem to be two places where Firefox is "first" (default and > >> shipped) in the evolution section. > >> > >> The Matthew Miller sections seems a bit repetitious. Perhaps shorten it > >> to include the key quotes that add to the prior sections rather than > >> repeating them. > >> > >> > >> Have a Great Day! > >> > >> Pat (tablepc) > >> > >> > >> On 1/27/20 10:14 AM, Silvia Sánchez wrote: > >> > Hello all, > >> > > >> > Sorry for being so late with this article, too many things in the way. > >> Now > >> > about the changes you suggested, Matthew... I added them all except > the > >> > bit about code names because that's something I'm planning to explain > in > >> > detail when I get to that part of Fedora's history. This article > >> should be > >> > the beginning/introduction to Fedora with a focus on the early years. > >> Or > >> > that's how I planned it. > >> > Please, review the article and let me know if there's anything else > that > >> > needs change. Also, I'd like to know who will take care of the banner > >> > image. > >> > > >> > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=29794&preview=1&_ppp=51d8922c6d > >> > > >> > Kind regards, > >> > Silvia > >> > FAS: Lailah > >> > > >> > > >> > > >> > > >> > > >> > > >> > > >> > > >> > On Tue, 14 Jan 2020 at 19:46, Matthew Miller < > mattdm@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > >> > wrote: > >> > > >> >> On Tue, Jan 07, 2020 at 09:19:47AM +0300, Silvia Sánchez wrote: > >> >>> It's me again, sorry for the delay. I added images and checked the > >> text > >> >>> again, please review it. > >> >> > >> >> Some comments: > >> >> > >> >> The lacrosse hat story is the official one -- I think that should go > >> first. > >> >> I don't think the "red hat hacker" association was intended. (In > fact, > >> I'm > >> >> not even sure that that *was* a term in the 1990s, although "black > >> hat" and > >> >> "white hat" certainly were.) > >> >> > >> >> On "timeline core and extras", I would like to be careful with the > >> >> distinction between "Red Hat" and "community" and the story around > >> that. > >> >> I know you quote me explaining it below :) but it's a big deal so I'd > >> like > >> >> the introduction to be right too. > >> >> > >> >> Further down... it might be nice to explain that we dropped the > >> codenames > >> >> because it became increasingly difficult to find names that fit our > >> process > >> >> and could be approved by legal. Not because we hate fun. :) > >> >> > >> >> -- > >> >> Matthew Miller > >> >> <mattdm@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > >> >> Fedora Project Leader > >> >> > >> > _______________________________________________ > >> > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > >> > To unsubscribe send an email to > magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > >> > Fedora Code of Conduct: > >> https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ > >> > List Guidelines: > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > >> > List Archives: > >> > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > >> > > >> > > > _______________________________________________ > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > Fedora Code of Conduct: > https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ > List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > List Archives: > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
