Silvia,
There seem to be two places where Firefox is "first" (default and
shipped) in the evolution section.
The Matthew Miller sections seems a bit repetitious. Perhaps shorten it
to include the key quotes that add to the prior sections rather than
repeating them.
Have a Great Day!
Pat (tablepc)
On 1/27/20 10:14 AM, Silvia Sánchez wrote:
Hello all,
Sorry for being so late with this article, too many things in the way. Now
about the changes you suggested, Matthew... I added them all except the
bit about code names because that's something I'm planning to explain in
detail when I get to that part of Fedora's history. This article should be
the beginning/introduction to Fedora with a focus on the early years. Or
that's how I planned it.
Please, review the article and let me know if there's anything else that
needs change. Also, I'd like to know who will take care of the banner
image.
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=29794&preview=1&_ppp=51d8922c6d
Kind regards,
Silvia
FAS: Lailah
On Tue, 14 Jan 2020 at 19:46, Matthew Miller <mattdm@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
wrote:
On Tue, Jan 07, 2020 at 09:19:47AM +0300, Silvia Sánchez wrote:
It's me again, sorry for the delay. I added images and checked the text
again, please review it.
Some comments:
The lacrosse hat story is the official one -- I think that should go first.
I don't think the "red hat hacker" association was intended. (In fact, I'm
not even sure that that *was* a term in the 1990s, although "black hat" and
"white hat" certainly were.)
On "timeline core and extras", I would like to be careful with the
distinction between "Red Hat" and "community" and the story around that.
I know you quote me explaining it below :) but it's a big deal so I'd like
the introduction to be right too.
Further down... it might be nice to explain that we dropped the codenames
because it became increasingly difficult to find names that fit our process
and could be approved by legal. Not because we hate fun. :)
--
Matthew Miller
<mattdm@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Fedora Project Leader
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