Hello all, I'll check the bit about Firefox, I didn't realise there was some sort of confusion, I'll fix it. I'll trim Matthew's sections to make them easier to read and less repetitious. Thanks for pointing it out. Kind regards, Silvia FAS: Lailah On Mon, 27 Jan 2020 at 18:38, pmkellly@xxxxxxxxxxxx <pmkellly@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Silvia, > > There seem to be two places where Firefox is "first" (default and > shipped) in the evolution section. > > The Matthew Miller sections seems a bit repetitious. Perhaps shorten it > to include the key quotes that add to the prior sections rather than > repeating them. > > > Have a Great Day! > > Pat (tablepc) > > > On 1/27/20 10:14 AM, Silvia Sánchez wrote: > > Hello all, > > > > Sorry for being so late with this article, too many things in the way. > Now > > about the changes you suggested, Matthew... I added them all except the > > bit about code names because that's something I'm planning to explain in > > detail when I get to that part of Fedora's history. This article should > be > > the beginning/introduction to Fedora with a focus on the early years. Or > > that's how I planned it. > > Please, review the article and let me know if there's anything else that > > needs change. Also, I'd like to know who will take care of the banner > > image. > > > > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=29794&preview=1&_ppp=51d8922c6d > > > > Kind regards, > > Silvia > > FAS: Lailah > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > On Tue, 14 Jan 2020 at 19:46, Matthew Miller <mattdm@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > > wrote: > > > >> On Tue, Jan 07, 2020 at 09:19:47AM +0300, Silvia Sánchez wrote: > >>> It's me again, sorry for the delay. I added images and checked the > text > >>> again, please review it. > >> > >> Some comments: > >> > >> The lacrosse hat story is the official one -- I think that should go > first. > >> I don't think the "red hat hacker" association was intended. (In fact, > I'm > >> not even sure that that *was* a term in the 1990s, although "black hat" > and > >> "white hat" certainly were.) > >> > >> On "timeline core and extras", I would like to be careful with the > >> distinction between "Red Hat" and "community" and the story around that. > >> I know you quote me explaining it below :) but it's a big deal so I'd > like > >> the introduction to be right too. > >> > >> Further down... it might be nice to explain that we dropped the > codenames > >> because it became increasingly difficult to find names that fit our > process > >> and could be approved by legal. Not because we hate fun. :) > >> > >> -- > >> Matthew Miller > >> <mattdm@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > >> Fedora Project Leader > >> > > _______________________________________________ > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > Fedora Code of Conduct: > https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ > > List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > > List Archives: > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
