Hello all, Following Pat's suggestions, I trimmed Matthew's paragraphs and fixed the issues about Firefox and versions. Here is the link: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=29794&preview=1&_ppp=bd44f59fcf Cheers, Silvia FAS: Lailah On Tue, 28 Jan 2020 at 16:25, Silvia Sánchez <bhkohane@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Hello all, > > I'll check the bit about Firefox, I didn't realise there was some sort of > confusion, I'll fix it. > I'll trim Matthew's sections to make them easier to read and less > repetitious. Thanks for pointing it out. > > Kind regards, > Silvia > FAS: Lailah > > > > > > On Mon, 27 Jan 2020 at 18:38, pmkellly@xxxxxxxxxxxx <pmkellly@xxxxxxxxxxxx> > wrote: > >> Silvia, >> >> There seem to be two places where Firefox is "first" (default and >> shipped) in the evolution section. >> >> The Matthew Miller sections seems a bit repetitious. Perhaps shorten it >> to include the key quotes that add to the prior sections rather than >> repeating them. >> >> >> Have a Great Day! >> >> Pat (tablepc) >> >> >> On 1/27/20 10:14 AM, Silvia Sánchez wrote: >> > Hello all, >> > >> > Sorry for being so late with this article, too many things in the way. >> Now >> > about the changes you suggested, Matthew... I added them all except the >> > bit about code names because that's something I'm planning to explain in >> > detail when I get to that part of Fedora's history. This article >> should be >> > the beginning/introduction to Fedora with a focus on the early years. >> Or >> > that's how I planned it. >> > Please, review the article and let me know if there's anything else that >> > needs change. Also, I'd like to know who will take care of the banner >> > image. >> > >> > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=29794&preview=1&_ppp=51d8922c6d >> > >> > Kind regards, >> > Silvia >> > FAS: Lailah >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > On Tue, 14 Jan 2020 at 19:46, Matthew Miller <mattdm@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> >> > wrote: >> > >> >> On Tue, Jan 07, 2020 at 09:19:47AM +0300, Silvia Sánchez wrote: >> >>> It's me again, sorry for the delay. I added images and checked the >> text >> >>> again, please review it. >> >> >> >> Some comments: >> >> >> >> The lacrosse hat story is the official one -- I think that should go >> first. >> >> I don't think the "red hat hacker" association was intended. (In fact, >> I'm >> >> not even sure that that *was* a term in the 1990s, although "black >> hat" and >> >> "white hat" certainly were.) >> >> >> >> On "timeline core and extras", I would like to be careful with the >> >> distinction between "Red Hat" and "community" and the story around >> that. >> >> I know you quote me explaining it below :) but it's a big deal so I'd >> like >> >> the introduction to be right too. >> >> >> >> Further down... it might be nice to explain that we dropped the >> codenames >> >> because it became increasingly difficult to find names that fit our >> process >> >> and could be approved by legal. Not because we hate fun. :) >> >> >> >> -- >> >> Matthew Miller >> >> <mattdm@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> >> >> Fedora Project Leader >> >> >> > _______________________________________________ >> > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> > Fedora Code of Conduct: >> https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ >> > List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines >> > List Archives: >> https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> > >> > _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
