Yup, makes sense. By the way, I do happen to know a way to test RAID
stuff, just in case you get the yen to play around. You can make a
couple large files, assign loop block devices to them, and treat them
like disks:
$ sudo -i
# for i in {0..3}; do dd if=/dev/zero of=diskfile$i bs=1M count=1024
conv=noerror,sync ; done
# for i in diskfile* ; do losetup -f $i ; done
Now you have /dev/loop0 through /dev/loop3 that you can treat like
/dev/sd{a,b,c,d} and make an array. When you're done, just:
# losetup -D
# rm -f diskfile{0..3}
Paul
On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 9:29 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>
> Yeah the readability score was a difficult one to raise, and I gave up
> sort of except for the outro. I decided to fall back to what you had
> said before "Don't get caught up on technicalities" the schedule must go on.
>
>
> On 17/04/19 08:55 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
> > I saw the snippet after I wrote this -- thanks! I also made that more
> > active, with a call-to-action (such as "Learn how to," "Read about,"
> > etc.). Let me know if some of the changes I made make sense. The
> > passive/active part takes some practice, it's not always easy. In
> > fact, I couldn't get that to go "green" without goofing the text up
> > too much. As i said, the article was a good one so these are all just
> > fine-tuning.
> >
> > Paul
> >
> > On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 8:32 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> >> I did use the Yoast SEO, and I worked at trying to get the readability
> >> score up, for all of Sunday morning,without tainting the actual content
> >> or message the author was posting about. I did add to the Snippet to
> >> bring it into the green zone. As for scheduling, I meant to publish last
> >> night but there were some matters pressing I had to attend to. Timing is
> >> everything some days.
> >>
> >> SDS
> >>
> >> On 17/04/19 08:26 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
> >>> Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points,
> >>> though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to
> >>> help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many
> >>> passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and
> >>> rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by Klingons" at
> >>> the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical
> >>> sense, it's passive voice. So for example:
> >>>
> >>> Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be
> >>> reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.]
> >>> Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID
> >>> array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.]
> >>>
> >>> Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with
> >>> subheadings for more readability.
> >>>
> >>> There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search
> >>> engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and
> >>> will publish since no one scheduled it already.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Paul
> >>>
> >>> On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> >>>> You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I couldn't
> >>>> try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it stands
> >>>> and nothing to do with the topic. :-)
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
> >>>>> Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements is a
> >>>>> definite improvement. :-)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
> >>>>>> Edited the mdadm
> >>>>>> On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> >>>>>>> Minutes: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04-10-20.02.html
> >>>>>>> Minutes (text): https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04-10-20.02.txt
> >>>>>>> Log: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04-10-20.02.log.html
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> * * *
> >>>>>>> =========================================
> >>>>>>> #fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
> >>>>>>> =========================================
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are
> >>>>>>> available at
> >>>>>>> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04-10-20.02.log.html
> >>>>>>> .
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Meeting summary
> >>>>>>> ---------------
> >>>>>>> * Roll call (stickster, 20:02:05)
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> * Last week stats (stickster, 20:04:09)
> >>>>>>> * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous
> >>>>>>> week 63K (stickster, 20:04:38)
> >>>>>>> * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either (stickster,
> >>>>>>> 20:05:56)
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> * Social network access (stickster, 20:07:43)
> >>>>>>> * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network
> >>>>>>> access (stickster, 20:11:52)
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> * Pending review posts (stickster, 20:12:18)
> >>>>>>> * LINK:
> >>>>>>> https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending
> >>>>>>> (stickster, 20:12:32)
> >>>>>>> * --- How do you Fedora? --- (stickster, 20:13:38)
> >>>>>>> * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc
> >>>>>>> (stickster, 20:13:58)
> >>>>>>> * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
> >>>>>>> (stickster, 20:15:19)
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> * Drafts to review (stickster, 20:16:28)
> >>>>>>> * LINK:
> >>>>>>> https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderby=date&order=desc
> >>>>>>> (stickster, 20:16:30)
> >>>>>>> * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article (stickster,
> >>>>>>> 20:25:01)
> >>>>>> Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think.
> >>>>>> jakfrost
> >>>>>>> * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article (stickster, 20:26:05)
> >>>>>>> * --- K3s on Fedora IoT --- (stickster, 20:26:24)
> >>>>>>> * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf
> >>>>>>> (stickster, 20:26:42)
> >>>>>>> * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for
> >>>>>>> Monday Apr 15 (stickster, 20:31:35)
> >>>>>>> * --- FFSend --- (stickster, 20:32:03)
> >>>>>>> * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd
> >>>>>>> (stickster, 20:34:22)
> >>>>>>> * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
> >>>>>>> (stickster, 20:36:28)
> >>>>>>> * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora --- (stickster, 20:37:30)
> >>>>>>> * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >>>>>>> (stickster, 20:42:34)
> >>>>>>> * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
> >>>>>>> (stickster, 20:42:45)
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> * Pitches to review (stickster, 20:47:18)
> >>>>>>> * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB --- (stickster, 20:47:29)
> >>>>>>> * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc
> >>>>>>> (stickster, 20:47:31)
> >>>>>>> * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them
> >>>>>>> into drafting (stickster, 20:53:52)
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> * Publishing schedule! (stickster, 20:55:46)
> >>>>>>> * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s (ryanlerch)
> >>>>>>> -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr 19:
> >>>>>>> FFSend (stickster) (stickster, 20:58:02)
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Action Items
> >>>>>>> ------------
> >>>>>>> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
> >>>>>>> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
> >>>>>>> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
> >>>>>>> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
> >>>>>>> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr
> >>>>>>> 15
> >>>>>>> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
> >>>>>>> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >>>>>>> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
> >>>>>>> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into
> >>>>>>> drafting
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Action Items, by person
> >>>>>>> -----------------------
> >>>>>>> * jakfrost
> >>>>>>> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
> >>>>>>> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into
> >>>>>>> drafting
> >>>>>>> * ryanlerch
> >>>>>>> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
> >>>>>>> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday
> >>>>>>> Apr 15
> >>>>>>> * stickster
> >>>>>>> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
> >>>>>>> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
> >>>>>>> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
> >>>>>>> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >>>>>>> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
> >>>>>>> * **UNASSIGNED**
> >>>>>>> * (none)
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> People Present (lines said)
> >>>>>>> ---------------------------
> >>>>>>> * stickster (109)
> >>>>>>> * jakfrost (18)
> >>>>>>> * ryanlerch (14)
> >>>>>>> * zodbot (12)
> >>>>>>> * gregbartholomew_ (11)
> >>>>>>> * sdgathman (6)
> >>>>>>> * pjones (2)
> >>>>>>> * asamalik (0)
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
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