Yeah the readability score was a difficult one to raise, and I gave up
sort of except for the outro. I decided to fall back to what you had
said before "Don't get caught up on technicalities" the schedule must go on.
On 17/04/19 08:55 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
I saw the snippet after I wrote this -- thanks! I also made that more
active, with a call-to-action (such as "Learn how to," "Read about,"
etc.). Let me know if some of the changes I made make sense. The
passive/active part takes some practice, it's not always easy. In
fact, I couldn't get that to go "green" without goofing the text up
too much. As i said, the article was a good one so these are all just
fine-tuning.
Paul
On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 8:32 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
I did use the Yoast SEO, and I worked at trying to get the readability
score up, for all of Sunday morning,without tainting the actual content
or message the author was posting about. I did add to the Snippet to
bring it into the green zone. As for scheduling, I meant to publish last
night but there were some matters pressing I had to attend to. Timing is
everything some days.
SDS
On 17/04/19 08:26 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points,
though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to
help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many
passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and
rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by Klingons" at
the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical
sense, it's passive voice. So for example:
Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be
reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.]
Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID
array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.]
Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with
subheadings for more readability.
There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search
engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and
will publish since no one scheduled it already.
Paul
On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I couldn't
try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it stands
and nothing to do with the topic. :-)
On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements is a
definite improvement. :-)
On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
Edited the mdadm
On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
Minutes: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04-10-20.02.html
Minutes (text): https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04-10-20.02.txt
Log: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04-10-20.02.log.html
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#fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
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Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are
available at
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04-10-20.02.log.html
.
Meeting summary
---------------
* Roll call (stickster, 20:02:05)
* Last week stats (stickster, 20:04:09)
* Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous
week 63K (stickster, 20:04:38)
* March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either (stickster,
20:05:56)
* Social network access (stickster, 20:07:43)
* ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network
access (stickster, 20:11:52)
* Pending review posts (stickster, 20:12:18)
* LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending
(stickster, 20:12:32)
* --- How do you Fedora? --- (stickster, 20:13:38)
* LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc
(stickster, 20:13:58)
* ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
(stickster, 20:15:19)
* Drafts to review (stickster, 20:16:28)
* LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderby=date&order=desc
(stickster, 20:16:30)
* ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article (stickster,
20:25:01)
Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think.
jakfrost
* ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article (stickster, 20:26:05)
* --- K3s on Fedora IoT --- (stickster, 20:26:24)
* LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf
(stickster, 20:26:42)
* ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for
Monday Apr 15 (stickster, 20:31:35)
* --- FFSend --- (stickster, 20:32:03)
* LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd
(stickster, 20:34:22)
* ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
(stickster, 20:36:28)
* --- converted video to DVD on Fedora --- (stickster, 20:37:30)
* ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
(stickster, 20:42:34)
* ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
(stickster, 20:42:45)
* Pitches to review (stickster, 20:47:18)
* --- Tuning shell on WS/SB --- (stickster, 20:47:29)
* LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc
(stickster, 20:47:31)
* ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them
into drafting (stickster, 20:53:52)
* Publishing schedule! (stickster, 20:55:46)
* AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s (ryanlerch)
-- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr 19:
FFSend (stickster) (stickster, 20:58:02)
Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
Action Items
------------
* stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
* stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
* jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
* ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
* ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr
15
* stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
* stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
* stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
* jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into
drafting
Action Items, by person
-----------------------
* jakfrost
* jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
* jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into
drafting
* ryanlerch
* ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
* ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday
Apr 15
* stickster
* stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
* stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
* stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
* stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
* stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
* **UNASSIGNED**
* (none)
People Present (lines said)
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* stickster (109)
* jakfrost (18)
* ryanlerch (14)
* zodbot (12)
* gregbartholomew_ (11)
* sdgathman (6)
* pjones (2)
* asamalik (0)
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