Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points, though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by Klingons" at the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical sense, it's passive voice. So for example: Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.] Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.] Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with subheadings for more readability. There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and will publish since no one scheduled it already. Paul On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I couldn't > try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it stands > and nothing to do with the topic. :-) > > > On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote: > > Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements is a > > definite improvement. :-) > > > > On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote: > >> Edited the mdadm > >> On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote: > >>> Minutes: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04-10-20.02.html > >>> Minutes (text): https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04-10-20.02.txt > >>> Log: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04-10-20.02.log.html > >>> > >>> * * * > >>> ========================================= > >>> #fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board > >>> ========================================= > >>> > >>> > >>> Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are > >>> available at > >>> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04-10-20.02.log.html > >>> . > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> Meeting summary > >>> --------------- > >>> * Roll call (stickster, 20:02:05) > >>> > >>> * Last week stats (stickster, 20:04:09) > >>> * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous > >>> week 63K (stickster, 20:04:38) > >>> * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either (stickster, > >>> 20:05:56) > >>> > >>> * Social network access (stickster, 20:07:43) > >>> * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network > >>> access (stickster, 20:11:52) > >>> > >>> * Pending review posts (stickster, 20:12:18) > >>> * LINK: > >>> https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending > >>> (stickster, 20:12:32) > >>> * --- How do you Fedora? --- (stickster, 20:13:38) > >>> * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc > >>> (stickster, 20:13:58) > >>> * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 > >>> (stickster, 20:15:19) > >>> > >>> * Drafts to review (stickster, 20:16:28) > >>> * LINK: > >>> https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderby=date&order=desc > >>> (stickster, 20:16:30) > >>> * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article (stickster, > >>> 20:25:01) > >> Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think. > >> jakfrost > >>> * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article (stickster, 20:26:05) > >>> * --- K3s on Fedora IoT --- (stickster, 20:26:24) > >>> * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf > >>> (stickster, 20:26:42) > >>> * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for > >>> Monday Apr 15 (stickster, 20:31:35) > >>> * --- FFSend --- (stickster, 20:32:03) > >>> * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd > >>> (stickster, 20:34:22) > >>> * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 > >>> (stickster, 20:36:28) > >>> * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora --- (stickster, 20:37:30) > >>> * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status > >>> (stickster, 20:42:34) > >>> * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly > >>> (stickster, 20:42:45) > >>> > >>> * Pitches to review (stickster, 20:47:18) > >>> * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB --- (stickster, 20:47:29) > >>> * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc > >>> (stickster, 20:47:31) > >>> * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them > >>> into drafting (stickster, 20:53:52) > >>> > >>> * Publishing schedule! (stickster, 20:55:46) > >>> * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s (ryanlerch) > >>> -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr 19: > >>> FFSend (stickster) (stickster, 20:58:02) > >>> > >>> Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC. > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> Action Items > >>> ------------ > >>> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access > >>> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 > >>> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article > >>> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article > >>> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr > >>> 15 > >>> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 > >>> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status > >>> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly > >>> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into > >>> drafting > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> Action Items, by person > >>> ----------------------- > >>> * jakfrost > >>> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article > >>> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into > >>> drafting > >>> * ryanlerch > >>> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article > >>> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday > >>> Apr 15 > >>> * stickster > >>> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access > >>> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 > >>> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 > >>> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status > >>> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly > >>> * **UNASSIGNED** > >>> * (none) > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> People Present (lines said) > >>> --------------------------- > >>> * stickster (109) > >>> * jakfrost (18) > >>> * ryanlerch (14) > >>> * zodbot (12) > >>> * gregbartholomew_ (11) > >>> * sdgathman (6) > >>> * pjones (2) > >>> * asamalik (0) > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> Generated by `MeetBot`_ 0.1.4 > >>> > >>> .. _`MeetBot`: http://wiki.debian.org/MeetBot > >>> > >> _______________________________________________ > >> Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > >> To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > >> Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html > >> List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > >> List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > _______________________________________________ > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html > List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
