On Tue, Mar 9, 2021 at 5:18 PM Tom Lane <tgl@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
"David G. Johnston" <david.g.johnston@xxxxxxxxx> writes:
> On Tue, Mar 9, 2021 at 4:50 PM Tom Lane <tgl@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>> Would it be better
>> to turn the para into a bulleted list, which we could introduce with
>> "The key differences are:" ?
> Indeed, reworking the rest of the paragraph around that introduction would
> be much better.
v2 attached.
Thank you. That reads much better, aside from maybe a couple of missing commas.
- Certain function attributes such as strictness don't apply to
+ Certain function attributes, such as strictness, don't apply to
David J.
