"David G. Johnston" <david.g.johnston@xxxxxxxxx> writes: > The omission of the "OUT" parameter mode seems intentional since at present > our procedures do not support OUT mode parameters. Um, I just created one. I think this *used* to be true, and this bit of the docs didn't get fixed. If I back-patch this, I'll have to research when it changed. > Instead of "The difference" or "One difference" I would suggest: "However, > a procedure does not return a value, so there is no return type > declaration; though a procedure can declare INOUT (but not plain OUT) > parameters." Not sure if that's an improvement. > Relocating the links to the description instead of usage is good. The > additional procedure link after the examples seems redundant, particularly > as the linked to location doesn't actually have more examples. I was modeling that on the existing pattern in create_function.sgml, which has similar verbiage in the EXAMPLES section. But I suppose we could drop that if we have a link in the description section. regards, tom lane