| Hi Paul,
Thanks for the review! You can find an updated version of the document here:
Responses inline.
On Apr 15, 2020, at 8:48 AM, Paul Wouters via Datatracker < noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
Reviewer: Paul Wouters
Review result: Has Nits
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.
The summary of the review is Has Nits
Compared to my last review (-09) a lot of text has been removed, reducing the
technical details and giving a briefer (but arguably cleaner) overview.
I do still have a personal preference of dropping CurveCP and MinimalT as I
don't really think these are anything but abandoned research items. I have
never seen or heard of these being deployed. I would be more tempted to list
openconnect (draft-mavrogiannopoulos-openconnect) which actually does see quite
some deployment. If the intent is really to show different kind of API's, than
there are other esoteric examples that could be included, such as
Off-The-Record(OTR) or Signal, which are mostly encrypted chat programs, but
with the ability to generate session keys for encrypted bulk transport (eg for
video/audio or file transfer)
We discussed for Signal and OTR. Our sense was that these protocols are more asynchronous application-layer protocols that are akin to MLS, that can be more independent from a transport layer.
Section 5.1
"Session Cache Management (CM):" which does not include IKEv2/IPsec, even
though it does have session resumption (RFC 5723). I guess this is because the
section limits itself to "the application" that can restart the session. But
for IKEv2/IPsec the same could be said. An application that after a long idle
period sends a packet, triggers a kernel ACQUIRE, which triggers an IKEv2
session resumption. WireGuard does not have this capability as there are no
API/hooks for packet trigger tunnel events (AFAIK)
Indeed, this refers to an explicit interface for cache management.
"Pre-Shared Key Import (PSKI):" lists WireGuard, but AFAIK it does not support
PSK based authentication - only public key based authentication.
We discussed that WireGuard uses the IKpsk2 Noise pattern (see https://www.wireguard.com/protocol/, and https://noiseexplorer.com/patterns/IKpsk2/), in which a responder uses its PSK to additionally authenticate a connection. While I
understand the IKEv2 entry (PSKs are used for authentication of peers), I am
not sure the ESP entry should be here. ESP does not "authenticate peers",
unless you call "being able to decrypt and authenticate packets" as an instance
of "authenticating peer"
We’ve changed the reference to be IPsec as a unit for IKEv2 + ESP in these lists.
Section 5.2
This states "This can call into the application to offload validation.". This
"can" is only not supported by WireGuard, as all of this is happening inside
the kernel. Maybe a note could be useful here?
Switched to "This can offload validation or occur transparently to the application."
"Source Address Validation" - It is a little unclear why TCP based protocols
are not listed here. They (implicitly) do source address validation. Perhaps
the introduction in this paragraph can state this more explicitly. Eg "for
those protocols that do not use TCP and therefor do not have builtin source
address validation ........"
We clarify here that:
"Of the protocols listed above that depend on the transport for message framing, some do have well-defined mappings for sending their messages over byte-stream transports like TCP.”
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