Joel - I don’t fully understand the rest of your comment then. You said: " And that document does appear to define the SRMS." (where "that document" refers to draft-ietf-spring-conflict-resolution). But the conflict resolution document never defined an SRMS - it merely described how SRMS advertisements were used in the context of conflict resolution. So if you are unsatisfied with the "SRMS definition" in ldp-interop draft I think you need to be more clear as to what you think is lacking. I leave it to the draft authors to resolve this issue with you. Les > -----Original Message----- > From: Joel Halpern Direct <jmh.direct@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > Sent: Monday, May 14, 2018 1:16 PM > To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) <ginsberg@xxxxxxxxx>; Joel Halpern > <jmh@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>; gen-art@xxxxxxxx > Cc: draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop.all@xxxxxxxx; > spring@xxxxxxxx; ietf@xxxxxxxx > Subject: Re: [spring] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-segment- > routing-ldp-interop-11 > > Thanks Les. I wondered if that were the case. > > Looking again at the draft, the problem then is that section 4.2 of the subject > draft is not a normative definition of an SRMS. It states the general > functionality, and then provides an example of how it would work in the > given scenario. > > If the text were enhanced to be an effective normative definition of an > SRMS, then that would also resolve the quesiton of the intended status of > the draft. > > Yours, > Joel > > On 5/14/18 4:12 PM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote: > > Joel - > > > > I am not an author of this draft - but I am an author on the referenced IS-IS > draft - which I assume is one of the drafts mentioned in your comment: > > > >> Server). Looking at the relevant routing protocol document, they point > to > >> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-spring-conflict-resolution-05 as > the > >> defining source for the SRMS. > > > > The IGP document references in the ldp-interop draft are stale. Newer > versions of the IGP drafts have been published and they no longer reference > draft-ietf-spring-conflict-resolution - a draft which is no longer active. > > > > HTH > > > > Les > > > > > >> -----Original Message----- > >> From: spring <spring-bounces@xxxxxxxx> On Behalf Of Joel Halpern > >> Sent: Monday, May 14, 2018 1:01 PM > >> To: gen-art@xxxxxxxx > >> Cc: draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop.all@xxxxxxxx; > >> spring@xxxxxxxx; ietf@xxxxxxxx > >> Subject: [spring] Genart last call review of > >> draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing- > >> ldp-interop-11 > >> > >> Reviewer: Joel Halpern > >> Review result: Ready with Issues > >> > >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by > >> the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like > >> any other last call comments. > >> > >> For more information, please see the FAQ at > >> > >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > >> > >> Document: draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-11 > >> Reviewer: Joel Halpern > >> Review Date: 2018-05-14 > >> IETF LC End Date: 2018-05-24 > >> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > >> > >> Summary: This document appears to be ready for publication as an RFC. > >> The question of whether it is an Informational RFC or a Proposed > >> Standards track RFC is one that the ADs should examine. > >> > >> Major issues: > >> This document is quite readable, and quite useful. If my reading below > >> (minor comment about section 4.2) is wrong, then everything is fine. > >> However, reading the text, it does not appear to define SRMS. Rather, > it > >> describes a good way to use SRMS to achive smooth SR - LDP > >> integration and > >> migration. As such, this seems to me to be a really good Informational > >> Document. > >> > >> Minor issues: > >> Section 4.2 states that it defines the SRMS (Segment Routing Mapping > >> Server). Looking at the relevant routing protocol document, they point > to > >> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-spring-conflict-resolution-05 as > the > >> defining source for the SRMS. And that document does appear to > >> define the > >> SRMS. > >> > >> Nits/editorial comments: > >> > >> > >> _______________________________________________ > >> spring mailing list > >> spring@xxxxxxxx > >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/spring