Hi Jari, I got the message from the responsible AD that a new version shall be submitted only after the telechat. And all the resolutions will be included in that version. Thanks, Yuanlong > -----Original Message----- > From: Jari Arkko [mailto:jari.arkko@xxxxxxxxx] > Sent: Thursday, December 03, 2015 8:08 PM > To: Jiangyuanlong; Russ Housley > Cc: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree.all@xxxxxxxx; IETF Gen-ART; IETF > Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10 > > Many thanks for your detailed review, Russ! > > Yuanlong, will there be a new draft version or other edits before the draft is > approved? > > Jari > > On 17 Nov 2015, at 00:53, Jiangyuanlong <jiangyuanlong@xxxxxxxxxx> > wrote: > > > Russ, > > > > Thanks a lot for your review and good observations. > > Please see my comments in line. > > > > Best regards, > > Yuanlong > > > >> -----Original Message----- > >> From: Russ Housley [mailto:housley@xxxxxxxxxxxx] > >> Sent: Saturday, November 14, 2015 1:28 AM > >> To: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree.all@xxxxxxxx > >> Cc: IETF Gen-ART; IETF > >> Subject: Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10 > >> > >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by > >> the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your > >> document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > >> > >> For more information, please see the FAQ at > >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > >> > >> Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10 > >> Reviewer: Russ Housley > >> Review Date: 2015-11-13 > >> IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-24 > >> IESG Telechat date: unknown > >> > >> Summary: Almost Ready > >> > >> > >> Major Concerns: None > >> > >> > >> Minor Concerns: > >> > >> Sections 4.1 and 5.3.1 inclues a reference to [802.1Q-2011]. Should > >> this be the 2014 version of the document? If not, please add the > >> informative reference for [802.1Q-2011]. > >> > > [YJ] Yes, all these should refer to [802.1Q-2014]. > > > >> > >> Other Editorial Comments: > >> > >> The Abstract should appear on the title page. > >> > > [YJ] OK. > > > >> Section 3 needs a reference for MEF 6.1: > >> s/Specification MEF 6.1/Specification MEF 6.1 [MEF6.1]/ Also, > >> [MEF6.1] needs to be added as a normative reference. > >> > > [YJ] All these will be updated to MEF 6.2. > > > >> Section 3 needs a reference for IEEE 802.1Q-2003: > >> s/B.1.3 of IEEE 802.1Q-2003/B.1.3 of IEEE 802.1Q-2003 [802.1Q-2003]/ > >> Also, please add an informative reference for [802.1Q-2003]. > >> > > [YJ] Yes, we will add an informative reference for [802.1Q-2003]. > > > >> Third level section headings do not have space between the section > >> number and the section title. For example: > >> s/5.3.1.PW Processing/5.3.1. PW Processing/ > >> > > [YJ] OK. > > > >> In Fig 4, there is room to shift the figure to the right, this will allow the > "AC" > >> labels to fit better on the left: > >> > >> +----------------------------------------+ > >> | VPLS-capable PE model | > >> | +---------------+ +------+ | > >> | | |==========|TVSI-1|------------ > >> +---+ AC | | ------------ |------------ PWs > >> |CE |----------| Bridge ------------ |------------ > >> +---+ | | | Root & +------+ | > >> | | Module | Leaf VLAN o | > >> | | | o | > >> | | | o | > >> | | | o | > >> | | | o | > >> +---+ AC | | | VLAN-n +------+ | > >> |CE |----------| ------------VSI-n |------------- > >> +---+ | | |==========| |------------- > PWs > >> | | | ^ | |------------- > >> | +---------------+ | +------+ | > >> | | | > >> +-------------------------|--------------+ > >> LAN emulation Interface > >> > >> Figure 4 A VPLS PE Model for E-Tree with a Single T-VSI > > > > > > [YJ] OK. > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Gen-art mailing list > > Gen-art@xxxxxxxx > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art