On 10/28/2015 9:11 PM, Scott Bradner wrote: > imo - any document that updates an existing document (especially technical standards and process documents) > needs to include a section that says what the differences are between the old version and the new version so > that readers can find out what they need to do differently than they have been doing > > I do not see such a section in this document Scott, Section 1.1 contains a general statement about the nature of changes made. But more importantly I believe your assertion of the specifics that are needed is pretty much never met for any of the IETF document revisions I've seen over the years. d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking bbiw.net