I suggested the change in the DT-list because I think that the draft was to focused in the ISOC program to give a clear guidance in how to attract more people to the IETF. In order to provide a broader guiadance we need to consider much more things that are not yet in the draft. Also, some sections would need to be re-written. /as On 10/16/13 10:47 PM, Alejandro Acosta wrote: > Hello, > I just read the new version of the draft, it's nice to see that most > suggestion/comments were added to the draft. > First, I would like to say I do support your draft. > Second, I noticed you changed the title of your draft from: > "Improving the ISOC Fellowship programme to Attracting people from > under-represented regions into > the IETF" > > to > > "Improving the ISOC Fellowship programme to attract people from > under-represented regions into the IETF" > > IMHO opinion -and not being native English speaker- you improved it a > little bit but I think the previous comments suggested even something > more generic, like just improving the ISOC fellowship programme and not > only "attack" people to the IETF. I mean, it's very true you mention > several other things in your draft besides attracting people. > > > Thanks, > > Alejandro, > > > > On 10/10/13 13:40, S Moonesamy wrote: >> Hi Jari, >> >> Here's is a draft about improving the ISOC Fellowship programme to >> attract people from under-represented regions into the IETF. The draft >> builds upon the ISOC work, proposing adjustments and additional efforts, >> with the goal of enabling more sustained and active participation by >> contributors from under-represented regions. >> >> In a blog article ( http://www.ietf.org/blog/2013/04/diversity/ ), it is >> mentioned that: >> >> "The design team will present their recommendations to the community, >> and engage in the discussion. Recommendations with community support >> will be taken forward." >> >> The draft only makes suggestions instead of recommendations. I am >> copying this message to ietf@xxxxxxxx so that the community can comment >> about the draft. >> >> Regards, >> S. Moonesamy