Hello, I just read the new version of the draft, it's nice to see that most suggestion/comments were added to the draft. First, I would like to say I do support your draft. Second, I noticed you changed the title of your draft from: "Improving the ISOC Fellowship programme to Attracting people from under-represented regions into the IETF" to "Improving the ISOC Fellowship programme to attract people from under-represented regions into the IETF" IMHO opinion -and not being native English speaker- you improved it a little bit but I think the previous comments suggested even something more generic, like just improving the ISOC fellowship programme and not only "attack" people to the IETF. I mean, it's very true you mention several other things in your draft besides attracting people. Thanks, Alejandro, On 10/10/13 13:40, S Moonesamy wrote: > Hi Jari, > > Here's is a draft about improving the ISOC Fellowship programme to > attract people from under-represented regions into the IETF. The draft > builds upon the ISOC work, proposing adjustments and additional efforts, > with the goal of enabling more sustained and active participation by > contributors from under-represented regions. > > In a blog article ( http://www.ietf.org/blog/2013/04/diversity/ ), it is > mentioned that: > > "The design team will present their recommendations to the community, > and engage in the discussion. Recommendations with community support > will be taken forward." > > The draft only makes suggestions instead of recommendations. I am > copying this message to ietf@xxxxxxxx so that the community can comment > about the draft. > > Regards, > S. Moonesamy