RE: Gen-ART LC review ofdraft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-ping-12

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HI,
I do not follow all the MPLS work, this Gen-ART review is done during the
IETF LC.  
I would think that your point should have been discussed in the WG before
sending the return path ping to publication.
BTW: I took a quick look at draft-andersson-mpls-lsp-ping-upd-00 third
paragraph of section 2 and I am not sure that the return path ping is
influenced since it does not use all the sub-tlv from tlv type 1 so it
should be a separate registry
Roni

> -----Original Message-----
> From: t.p. [mailto:daedulus@xxxxxxxxxxxxx]
> Sent: 29 August, 2013 6:33 PM
> To: Roni Even; draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-
> ping.all@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> Cc: gen-art@xxxxxxxx; ietf@xxxxxxxx
> Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review
ofdraft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-
> ping-12
> 
> Roni
> 
> I find it difficult to know whether to agree with you or not since there
is
> another "gorilla" operating in this namespace, namely
> draft-andersson-mpls-lsp-ping-upd-00
> which sort of gives the option of taking out the sub-TLV types of a TLV
Type
> into a separate registry which can then be referenced by the
specifications of
> several TLV Types.  This I-D formally calls for no action by IANA, except
that it
> implies a reorganisation of the registries which IANA might well already
have
> executed - certainly, the registries no longer look the same as they did a
few
> months ago although that might also be a coincidence.
> 
> You make reference to the registry set up by RFC6426 but you should be
> aware that what is now in the IANA registries is not what was there when
> that RFC was approved; rather, it has changed as alluded to above..
> 
> If
> draft-andersson-mpls-lsp-ping-upd-00
> is approved, and my perception is that IANA assumes it has been, then
this,
> return-path I-D would appear to be barking up the wrong tree and needs
> revising to reflect the new IANA structure, namely that it needs to update
> the title which already exists Sub-TLVs for TLV Types 1 and 16 to become
Sub-
> TLVs for TLV Types 1 and 16 and 21 whereupon things start to fall into
place
> 
> draft-andersson-mpls-lsp-ping-upd-00
> also updates RFC4379 which, if accepted, means, I think, that this I-D
need
> not.
> 
> All very technically sound but we seem to have our processes upside down.
> 
> There is of course a lengthy history to this that is not material to the
current
> discussion.
> 
> Tom Petch
> 
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@xxxxxxxxx>
> To: "'Mach Chen'" <mach.chen@xxxxxxxxxx>; <draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-
> specified-lsp-ping.all@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
> Cc: <gen-art@xxxxxxxx>; <ietf@xxxxxxxx>
> Sent: Thursday, August 29, 2013 11:24 AM
> Subject: RE: Gen-ART LC review
> ofdraft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-ping-12
> 
> 
> > Hi,
> > This text is OK if one wants to implement this draft.
> > My concern was about the consistency of the IANA registration so that
> if
> > someone defines a new TLV type 1 based on RFC4379, IANA will know that
> it
> > must update also the registry for TLV type 21. If you see no such
> problem, I
> > have no concerns
> > Roni
> >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Mach Chen [mailto:mach.chen@xxxxxxxxxx]
> > > Sent: 29 August, 2013 1:05 PM
> > > To: Roni Even; draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-
> > > ping.all@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > > Cc: ietf@xxxxxxxx; gen-art@xxxxxxxx
> > > Subject: RE: Gen-ART LC review of
> > draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-
> > > ping-12
> > >
> > > Hi Roni,
> > >
> > > How about this:
> > >
> > > " No assignments of sub-TLVs in the range of 0-16383 and 32768-49161
> > >     are made directly for TLV Type 21, sub-TLVs in these ranges are
> > >     copied from the assignments made for TLV Type 1 and kept the
> same
> > >     as that for TLV Type 1. All sub-TLVs in these ranges (include
> existing
> > >     and future defined) defined for TLV Type 1 apply to TLV Type 21.
> > >     Assignments of sub-..."
> > >
> > > Best regards,
> > > Mach
> > >
> > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > From: Roni Even [mailto:ron.even.tlv@xxxxxxxxx]
> > > > Sent: Thursday, August 29, 2013 5:21 PM
> > > > To: Mach Chen;
> > > > draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-ping.all@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > > > Cc: ietf@xxxxxxxx; gen-art@xxxxxxxx
> > > > Subject: RE: Gen-ART LC review of
> > > > draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-ping-12
> > > >
> > > > Hi,
> > > > I am not sure you responded to my latest email.
> > > >
> > > > Having the policy for TLV type 1 here is not enough in my view
> since I
> > > > only look at RFC4379 and create a new TLV type I will not know
> that I
> > > > have to register it also for the type 21 if it will not be
> mentioned
> > > >
> > > > As for the vendor specific see my other email Roni
> > > >
> > > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > > From: Mach Chen [mailto:mach.chen@xxxxxxxxxx]
> > > > > Sent: 29 August, 2013 11:33 AM
> > > > > To: Roni Even; draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-
> > > > > ping.all@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > > > > Cc: ietf@xxxxxxxx; gen-art@xxxxxxxx
> > > > > Subject: RE: Gen-ART LC review of
> > > > draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-
> > > > > ping-12
> > > > >
> > > > > Hi Roni,
> > > > >
> > > > > Thanks for your detailed review and comments!
> > > > >
> > > > > Please see my reply inline...
> > > > >
> > > > > > From: Roni Even [mailto:ron.even.tlv@xxxxxxxxx]
> > > > > > Sent: Wednesday, August 28, 2013 9:06 PM
> > > > > > To:
> > > > > >
> draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-ping.all@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > > > > > Cc: ietf@xxxxxxxx; gen-art@xxxxxxxx
> > > > > > Subject: Gen-ART LC review of
> > > > > > draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-ping-12
> > > > > >
> > > > > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For
> background
> > > > > > on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> > > > > > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> > > > > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call
> > > > > > comments you may receive.
> > > > > > Document: draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-ping-12
> > > > > > Reviewer: Roni Even
> > > > > > Review Date:2013-8-28
> > > > > > IETF LC End Date: 2013-9-4
> > > > > > IESG Telechat date:
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a
> standard
> > > > > > track
> > > > RFC.
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Major issues:
> > > > > > Minor issues:
> > > > > > I am not clear on the sub-TLV in section 6.2 1. If a new
> sub-TLV
> > > > > > is defined for TLV type 1 do they need also to be added to TLV
> type
> > 21.
> > > > > > This should be clear, and if there is some relation I think it
> > > > > > should be reflected in the IANA registry for TLV type 1
> > > > >
> > > > > Yes, type 21 TLV intends to reuse existing and future defined
> > > > > sub-TLVs for type TLV 1. And in Section 3.3, it has already
> stated
> > this, it
> > > says:
> > > > >
> > > > > "The Target FEC sub-TLVs defined in [RFC4379] provide a good way
> to
> > > > >    identify a specific return path.  The Reply Path TLV can
> carry any
> > > > >    sub-TLV defined for use in the Target FEC Stack TLV that can
> be
> > > > >    registered."
> > > > >
> > > > > So, for Section 6.2, to make it cleaner and more explicit, how
> about
> > > > > this
> > > > > change:
> > > > >
> > > > > Old:
> > > > >
> > > > > " No assignments of sub-TLVs in the range of 0-16383 and
> 32768-49161
> > > > >    are made directly for TLV Type 21, sub-TLVs in these ranges
> are
> > > > >    copied from the assignments made for TLV Type 1. Assignments
> of
> > > > sub-..."
> > > > >
> > > > > New:
> > > > >
> > > > > " No assignments of sub-TLVs in the range of 0-16383 and
> 32768-49161
> > > > >    are made directly for TLV Type 21, sub-TLVs in these ranges
> are
> > > > >    copied from the assignments (including existing and future
> > allocations)
> > > > >    made for TLV Type 1. Assignments of sub-..."
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > > 2. For the vendor or private use why a difference policy than
> the
> > > > > > rest of the sub-TLV registry
> > > > >
> > > > > This document does not make any changes to the "Vendor and
> Private
> > > use"
> > > > > definition, range and policy as defined in RFC4379. In RFC4379,
> it's
> > > > policy is
> > > > > defined different from other ranges.
> > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Nits/editorial comments:
> > > > > > 1. In section 3.4 I assume that "TC" is traffic class. It will
> be
> > > > > > good to expand and have reference.
> > > > >
> > > > > OK, will fix it when all last call comments received.
> > > > >
> > > > > Best regards,
> > > > > Mach
> >
> >






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