Cullen, in answer to your question, Yes.
A penultimate draft of the proposed changes to the Legal Provisions document is available from the IETF Trust website at
Please look at the version labelled:
Draft Legal Provisions Relating to IETF Documents after Community Last Call (2009-02-09)
FYI this draft is currently before the Trustees, for a decision by end of tomorrow. If the Trustees accept this draft, then two final edits will be required to formally adopt this policy document. The edits will be:
1) To finalize and identify the "Effective Date" in the title on page 1, and
2) To insert the effective date into the header information of pages 2-7 of the document.
Regards,
Ed Juskevicius
On Tue, Feb 10, 2009 at 1:10 PM, Cullen Jennings <fluffy@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
I've gotten a bit lost on all the changes. Would it be possible to send to the list a single email that summarizes the current proposed changes to the document published on the web sight? or just a new copy of the document?
On Feb 9, 2009, at 5:41 PM, Contreras, Jorge wrote:Ietf mailing list
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From: Thomas Narten [mailto:narten@xxxxxxxxxx]
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Subject: Re: [Trustees] Last Call for Comments: Proposed
work-around to thePre-5378 Problem
ContributorNEW PROPOSED
c. Derivative Works and Publication Limitations. If a
and derivativedesires to limit the right to make modifications
s/desires/needs/
I don't think that "desires" is appropriate here - as John pointed
out, the contributor has no discretion here, except for their
judgement as to whether rights are available.
Actually, in this case, it is the submitters choice, since we are
talking about case (i) or (ii) (and not (iii) which has been the
challenging case). And "desires" is the wording that has been used
here for a while.
But that said, a more neutral term is fine by me, since the
motivations for needing to select this may vary.
How about "chooses"?
Thomas
"chooses" is fine with me
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