--On Monday, 01 January, 2007 15:30 +0100 Harald Alvestrand <harald@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: >> I was using "wordsmithing" rather broadly. My probably >> idiosyncratic meaning >> of "wordsmithing" here was "will this DISCUSS change the >> mechanics of the protocol or not". If the answer is no, we're >> really just making the document >> more ready for publication IMO. Something that does bring >> that possibility is obviously a lot more serious. It's been >> my admittedly limited experience that >> my version of "wordsmithing" is a lot more common, and the >> source of a lot of delay to varying degrees of dubiousness. > > One meaning of "wordsmithing" resulting from a DISCUSS that I > think is an entirely worthwhile activity is where the > mechanics of the protocol, as implemented by a WG participant, > will not change one whit, but where the implementation by a > non-participant changes from "improbable" to "possible", > because it's clear what the words were intended to say. > Another example of "wordsmithing" that does not change the > mechanics of the protocol, but is nevertheless important, is > the IANA considerations stuff - while it does not change the > protocol as such, it does change the "meta-protocol" of > extending the protocol later. That's important. Harald, I could be wrong, but I believe that, if every instance of a "discuss" for "wordsmithing" purposes fell into one of the categories you have described above, we would not be having this discussion. I continue to believe that the document that started the original thread is not the right place to fix the problem. However, I suggest that there is a perception in the community --one that can be fairly well documented with specific episodes-- of long approval and publication delays that started with a "discuss" about issues of prose or presentation that do not have either significant "this is wrong" protocol impact or the level of impact you describe above. That, of course, leads to another discussions: when evaluating IESG or RFC Editor performance, we tend to assume that any delay between when the token is passed back to a WG or author and when it returns is a WG or author problem and doesn't count. In some cases, it clearly is a WG or author problem. But, in others, it is at least partially the result of a natural reaction: "after all of the work that went into this, we just don't have the energy to deal with that level of nit-picking". And since, unfortunately, there is often no way for an outsider to differentiate the two, we need to better understand and appreciate the costs of "discuss" positions that do not have a clear, substantive, basis appropriate to the maturity level of the proposal, even ones whose intent is to get additional explanations and understanding, to overall IETF productivity. john _______________________________________________ Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf