Reviewer: Jiankang Yao Review result: Ready I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft. The Art Area Review Team (ART-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Document: draft-ietf-add-split-horizon-authority-11 Reviewer: Jiankang Yao Review Date: 2024-06-01 Summary: Ready for publication. This document is clear and in good shape. One suggestion: In section 2 Terminology, " Encrypted DNS A DNS protocol that provides an encrypted channel between a DNS client and server (e.g., DNS over TLS (DoT) [RFC7858], HTTPS (DoH) [RFC8484], QUIC (DoQ) [RFC9250]). Split-Horizon DNS The DNS service provided by a resolver that also acts as an authoritative server for some names, providing resolution results that are meaningfully different from those in the Global DNS. (See "Split DNS" in Section 6 of [RFC9499].) " Encrypted ‘DNS’ is defined as "Protocol" while Split-Horizon ‘DNS’ is defined as "service". Same "DNS" points to different things. How about changing "Encrypted DNS" to "Encrypted DNS Protocols"? Best Regards Jiankang Yao -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
