Thanks for the review, please see inline
On Sun, 2 Jun 2024 at 09:05, Jiankang Yao via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
Reviewer: Jiankang Yao
Review result: Ready
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Document: draft-ietf-add-split-horizon-authority-11
Reviewer: Jiankang Yao
Review Date: 2024-06-01
Summary: Ready for publication.
This document is clear and in good shape.
One suggestion:
In section 2 Terminology,
"
Encrypted DNS
A DNS protocol that provides an encrypted channel between a DNS client and
server (e.g., DNS over TLS (DoT) [RFC7858], HTTPS (DoH) [RFC8484], QUIC (DoQ)
[RFC9250]).
Split-Horizon DNS
The DNS service provided by a resolver that also acts as an authoritative
server for some names, providing resolution results that are meaningfully
different from those in the Global DNS. (See "Split DNS" in Section 6 of
[RFC9499].)
"
Encrypted ‘DNS’ is defined as "Protocol" while Split-Horizon ‘DNS’ is defined
as "service". Same "DNS" points to different things.
How about changing "Encrypted DNS" to "Encrypted DNS Protocols"?
"Encrypted DNS" is already used in the terminology of other RFCs, like https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/rfc9463/
-Tiru
Best Regards
Jiankang Yao
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