[Last-Call] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-09

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Reviewer: Tim Wicinski
Review result: Has Nits

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

I am in agree with Russ Housley's genart comments and wish to see those
resolved.

Section 9.1 and 9.3 of the IANA considerations refer to the "Example Range"
assigned for use in examples in documentation.  This document should have
examples included - perhaps as an appendix.  I am always one to want good
examples and bad examples.



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