Reviewer: Mallory Knodel Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server-?? Reviewer: Mallory Knodel Review Date: 2024-02-13 IETF LC End Date: 2024-02-12 IESG Telechat date: 2024-02-29 Summary: The draft is ready with one minor issue and nits. Minor issue: The section 2.1.5. Guidelines for Configuring TCP Keep-Alives would seem to apply to all three modules though it is only elaborated in the first, which of course will be helpful to the following two but wondering if there is somehow a way to internally reference this section such that the reader looks to those guidelines no matter which of the three modules they are reading about. Nits/editorial comments: * Section 1.1. The first sentence should state "The document presents three..." * Section 3.1.2.1. The last sentence should state "...an IPv4 address, an IPv6 address, or a hostname." * -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
