Re: [Last-Call] [Ext] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting-07

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Hi Carlos,

> On 9 Dec 2023, at 14:43, Carlos Pignataro via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Carlos Pignataro
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting
> 
> Hi!
> 
> I was assigned a review of draft-ietf-dnsop-caching-resolution-failures, for an
> INTDIR Telechat Review.
> 
> Review of       draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting
> Type    Telechat Review
> Team    Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
> Deadline        2023-12-09
> Reviewer        Carlos Pignataro
> 
> In general, I found the document to be useful and clear, effectively organzied,
> and easy to follow for an implementor.
> 
> Please find below only some minor nits for consideration:
> 
> 1. Append a comma after "i.e.".
> 
> 2. Change "Well known" to "Well-known".
> 
> 3. Capitalization of "RRset" vs. "RRSet", although RFC 8499 mentions both.
> 
> 4. Should RFC 2199 be a Normative reference instead of Informative?

Ah, good catch. Will fix ‘em all

Thanks!

Roy




> Thanks!
> 
> Carlos.
> 

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