[Last-Call] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting-07

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Reviewer: Carlos Pignataro
Review result: Ready with Nits

draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting

Hi!

I was assigned a review of draft-ietf-dnsop-caching-resolution-failures, for an
INTDIR Telechat Review.

Review of       draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting
Type    Telechat Review
Team    Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline        2023-12-09
Reviewer        Carlos Pignataro

In general, I found the document to be useful and clear, effectively organzied,
and easy to follow for an implementor.

Please find below only some minor nits for consideration:

1. Append a comma after "i.e.".

2. Change "Well known" to "Well-known".

3. Capitalization of "RRset" vs. "RRSet", although RFC 8499 mentions both.

4. Should RFC 2199 be a Normative reference instead of Informative?

Thanks!

Carlos.


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