Reviewer: Dave Thaler Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned INTDIR reviewer for this draft. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Section 1: > The client learns the URI to use for the gateway using a well-known > URI [WELLKNOWN], "ohttp-gateway", "ohttp-gateway" is not a well-known URI, it is a URI suffix. Please reword. (Wording is fine in Sections 5, 6, and 8.2, it's only this one sentence that's incorrect.) > This document also defines a way to fetch an gateway's key s/an gateway/a gateway/ Section 4.1: > supports a Oblivious HTTP could look like this: s/a Oblivious/an Oblivious/ Section 7: > always checking for a gateway configuration Section 6 on the well- > known gateway location Section 5. Use of encrypted DNS along with I can't parse the Section uses in the middle of the sentence. Maybe they belong in parens? Section 7.2: > done by limiting the the allowable values of dohpath to a single s/the the/the/ -Dave -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
