Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-14 Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review Date: 2023-07-25 IETF LC End Date: 2023-08-01 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Major issues: Minor issues: 1. As SD-WAN is not an IETF work item, it needs to be better defined, possibly by reference. To understand the concept one needs to go to documents external to the IETF such as [MEF70.1]. If that is the authoritative reference (or there) it should be mentioned in the Introduction section. 2. Section 3.1.2 > The client interface of SD-WAN edges can be IP or Ethernet-based. We need a definition or reference (IEEE 802.3 or MEF) of what is meant by 'Ethernet-based'. Nits/editorial comments: In 4.2 and 6.2.1 MEF70.1 needs to be between brackets (Informational Reference) -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
