Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-lake-edhoc-18 Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 2022-12-20 IETF LC End Date: None IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The document is well written, and easy to read. I do have one minor issue that I would like the authors to address. Major issues: N/A Minor issues: Q1: The document talks about the Initiator and Responder roles, what messages they send etc. But I can't find a definition of what the roles. I assume the Initiator initiates something, but unless I have missed it it would be good to have a few word of role definitions. Nits/editorial comments: N/A -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
