On 25/10/2022 20:27, The IESG wrote:
The IESG has received a request from the Protocols for IP Multicast WG (pim)
to consider the following document: - 'A Yang Data Model for IGMP/MLD Proxy'
<draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-07.txt> as Proposed Standard
The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final
comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
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Last time I got this wrong but I believe that 225.0 is not appropriate
for documentation use. It should be 233.252.0/24 as per RFC5771.
In places, the spacing is double line spaced (which has appeared in
other recent I-Ds). I see this in parts of s.5 and s.6.1 and in thee
YANG Editors.
Simplified BSD should now be Revised BSD.
YANG has a 'should not' but no reference to RFC8174.
'membership report or leave' would be clearer to me with another word or
two, such as 'message'
Tom Petch
Abstract
This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to
configure and manage Internet Group Management Protocol (IGMP) or
Multicast Listener Discovery (MLD) proxy devices. The YANG module in
this document conforms to Network Management Datastore Architecture
(NMDA).
The file can be obtained via
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang/
No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.
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