Hi Ines,
Thanks for the reviews. We can of course include 7227 and I added the reference as follows:
This section details the payload of the DHCPv6 options following the guidelines of {
{?RFC7227}}.
{?RFC7227}}.
Regarding your second comment, I think what we meant is that the trust associated with the information obtained via the DHCP option described in this document is similar to the trust associated with the IP prefix. I think the texte might be clearer saying:
OLD:
The use of DHCPv6 options provides a similar level of trust as
the one used to provide the IP prefix
the one used to provide the IP prefix
NEW:
The trust associated with the information carried by the DHCPv6 Options described in this document is similar to the one associated with the IP prefix - when configured via DHCPv6.The changes can be seen on github:
Yours,
Daniel
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Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options-??
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2022-10-04
IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-04
IESG Telechat date: 2022-10-20
Summary:
This document defines DHCPv6 options so an Homenet Naming Authority (HNA) can
automatically proceed to the appropriate configuration and outsource the
authoritative naming service for the home network.
The document is well written and easy to understand.
I have two minor questions as nits.
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments/Questions:
1- Have you consider in this document RFC 7227- Guidelines for Creating New
DHCPv6 Options -? If yes, should it be added in the references? If not, why
not? 2- Page 9: "The use of DHCPv6 options provides a similar level of trust as
the one used to provide the IP prefix." In which features are similar? In which
features are dissimilar?
Thanks for this document,
Ines.
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