Hi Al,
Thanks for the review. We replaced the section by appendix. Actually we did not move the sections to the appendix and these have always been appendices - despite we called them sections. The reason to have them as appendices is that these are not describing the protocol. On the other hand, we have discussed having a separate companion document that contains the appendices. However, we are currently staying with the appendices at least for now.
The changes can be seen on the git repo:
Yours,
Daniel
Daniel
On Wed, Sep 28, 2022 at 4:36 PM Al Morton via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
Reviewer: Al Morton
Review result: Ready
>From the draft:
This document defines DHCPv6 options so an Homenet Naming Authority (HNA) can
automatically proceed to the appropriate configuration and outsource the
authoritative naming service for the home network. In most cases, the
outsourcing mechanism is transparent for the end user. The document describes
how a network can provision the HNA with a specific DOI. This could be
particularly useful for a DOI partly managed by an ISP, or to make home
networks resilient to HNA replacement. The ISP delegates an IP prefix to the
home network as well as the associated reverse zone. It appears that the
document accomplishes these goals (although I'm not an expert in homenet
topics). The Shepherd's form says that this and a companion draft are the last
items to complete before closing homenet (interest is waning). The protocol
details seem to be well-considered.
It appears that the Scenarios were moved to Appendices, rather than as
normative section and subsections:
Appendix A. Scenarios and impact on the End User
This *section* details various scenarios and discuss their impact on the
end user. This section is not normative and limits the description of a
limited scope of scenarios that are assumed to be representative. Many
other scenarios may be derived from these.
s/section/Appendix/g and other fixes.
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