Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions-04

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Hi Ken,
Thanks, it is OK 
Roni

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Ken Murchison [mailto:murch@xxxxxxxxxxxx]
> Sent: Monday, February 15, 2021 2:27 PM
> To: Roni Even; gen-art@xxxxxxxx
> Cc: calsify@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions.all@xxxxxxxx; last-
> call@xxxxxxxx
> Subject: Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions-04
> 
> Hi Roni,
> 
> Thanks for the review.  Your comment is addressed below.
> 
> 
> On 2/15/21 5:32 AM, Roni Even via Datatracker wrote:
> > Reviewer: Roni Even
> > Review result: Ready with Nits
> >
> > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by
> > the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like
> > any other last call comments.
> >
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> >
> > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> >
> > Document: draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions-??
> > Reviewer: Roni Even
> > Review Date: 2021-02-15
> > IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-16
> > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> >
> > Summary:
> > The document is ready for publication as standard track RFC with nits
> >
> > Major issues:
> >
> > Minor issues:
> >
> > Nits/editorial comments:
> >
> > 1. The structured-location is optional so if it is not specified for
> > proximity I assume that it implies current location?
> 
> 
> STRUCTURED-LOCATION is optional because its not used for PROXIMITY:
> [DIS]CONNECT.  I've made the following change to the text:
> 
>               <t hangText="Description:">This property is used to
>               indicate that an alarm has a location-based trigger. Its
>               value identifies the direction of motion used to trigger
> -            the alarm. One or more location values are set using
> +            the alarm. One or more location values MUST be set using
>               "STRUCTURED-LOCATION" properties.</t>
> 
> Is this sufficient?
> 
> --
> Kenneth Murchison
> Senior Software Developer
> Fastmail US LLC

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