Hi Ken, Thanks, it is OK Roni > -----Original Message----- > From: Ken Murchison [mailto:murch@xxxxxxxxxxxx] > Sent: Monday, February 15, 2021 2:27 PM > To: Roni Even; gen-art@xxxxxxxx > Cc: calsify@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions.all@xxxxxxxx; last- > call@xxxxxxxx > Subject: Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions-04 > > Hi Roni, > > Thanks for the review. Your comment is addressed below. > > > On 2/15/21 5:32 AM, Roni Even via Datatracker wrote: > > Reviewer: Roni Even > > Review result: Ready with Nits > > > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by > > the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like > > any other last call comments. > > > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > > > Document: draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions-?? > > Reviewer: Roni Even > > Review Date: 2021-02-15 > > IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-16 > > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > > > Summary: > > The document is ready for publication as standard track RFC with nits > > > > Major issues: > > > > Minor issues: > > > > Nits/editorial comments: > > > > 1. The structured-location is optional so if it is not specified for > > proximity I assume that it implies current location? > > > STRUCTURED-LOCATION is optional because its not used for PROXIMITY: > [DIS]CONNECT. I've made the following change to the text: > > <t hangText="Description:">This property is used to > indicate that an alarm has a location-based trigger. Its > value identifies the direction of motion used to trigger > - the alarm. One or more location values are set using > + the alarm. One or more location values MUST be set using > "STRUCTURED-LOCATION" properties.</t> > > Is this sufficient? > > -- > Kenneth Murchison > Senior Software Developer > Fastmail US LLC -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
