Roni, thanks for your review. Ken, thanks for addressing Roni’s comments. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Feb 17, 2021, at 12:07 AM, Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Hi Ken, > Thanks, it is OK > Roni > >> -----Original Message----- >> From: Ken Murchison [mailto:murch@xxxxxxxxxxxx] >> Sent: Monday, February 15, 2021 2:27 PM >> To: Roni Even; gen-art@xxxxxxxx >> Cc: calsify@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions.all@xxxxxxxx; last- >> call@xxxxxxxx >> Subject: Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions-04 >> >> Hi Roni, >> >> Thanks for the review. Your comment is addressed below. >> >> >> On 2/15/21 5:32 AM, Roni Even via Datatracker wrote: >>> Reviewer: Roni Even >>> Review result: Ready with Nits >>> >>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by >>> the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like >>> any other last call comments. >>> >>> For more information, please see the FAQ at >>> >>> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >>> >>> Document: draft-ietf-calext-valarm-extensions-?? >>> Reviewer: Roni Even >>> Review Date: 2021-02-15 >>> IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-16 >>> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat >>> >>> Summary: >>> The document is ready for publication as standard track RFC with nits >>> >>> Major issues: >>> >>> Minor issues: >>> >>> Nits/editorial comments: >>> >>> 1. The structured-location is optional so if it is not specified for >>> proximity I assume that it implies current location? >> >> >> STRUCTURED-LOCATION is optional because its not used for PROXIMITY: >> [DIS]CONNECT. I've made the following change to the text: >> >> <t hangText="Description:">This property is used to >> indicate that an alarm has a location-based trigger. Its >> value identifies the direction of motion used to trigger >> - the alarm. One or more location values are set using >> + the alarm. One or more location values MUST be set using >> "STRUCTURED-LOCATION" properties.</t> >> >> Is this sufficient? >> >> -- >> Kenneth Murchison >> Senior Software Developer >> Fastmail US LLC > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
