-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 On 13/05/10 11:05, Paul W. Frields wrote: > On Wed, May 12, 2010 at 07:04:57PM -0400, Gerard Ryan wrote: >> On 12/05/10 13:12, Rahul Sundaram wrote: >>> Hi, >>> >>> As you might have noticed, the marketing team has been doing a few >>> feature profiles covering various new features in Fedora 13, the last >>> ones remaining are one of Btrfs and SSSD >>> >>> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Btrfs_in_Fedora_13 >>> >>> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/SSSD_in_Fedora_13 >>> >>> So, take a quick look and let me if you have any suggestions on >>> improving it. Documentation folks - appreciate you review as well. We >>> would like to send it out to the press in a couple of days. >>> >>> Rahul >> >> Hi Rahul, >> >> I read the Btrfs interview, and I noted the following: >> >> 1. >> 'So right before doing a big yum update our plugin we'll take a snapshot >> of the filesystem, now you have two copies of the filesystem, and then >> yum does its update onto your original volume.' >> >> --I would suggest adding a comma after 'big yum update,' (for >> readability) and change 'we'll' to 'will' ('we'll' seems to be a typo >> there). >> >> >> 2. >> 'How many developers are working on Btrfs full time and from Red Hat? >> What do they focus on?' >> >> --Either remove 'and' or say 'How many developers from Red Hat are >> working on Btrfs full time?' >> >> >> 3. >> 'Is there any features that ZFS has that Btrfs does not at this point?' >> >> --Needs to be: 'Are there any features that ZFS has that Btrfs does not >> at this point?' >> >> >> I hope this has been helpful. Obviously there might be other things that >> I missed also. >> >> Gerard. > > Gerard, > > If you have a Fedora account already, you can actually make these > edits yourself. The wonderful thing about a wiki is that it > encourages collaboration like this directly on the document. You > don't need to ask for permission to make improvements. And the > changes you make are recorded in a history record, so if there's any > problem, it's easy to find and correct it. > > Thanks for participating and reviewing! > Oh yeah, didn't think of that Paul, thanks! I'm still finding my way around here! :) Made those changes to the wiki, and a couple more I didn't see the first time around! Gerard. -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.10 (GNU/Linux) Comment: Using GnuPG with Fedora - http://enigmail.mozdev.org/ iQEcBAEBAgAGBQJL7H30AAoJEPBxpN6NznvbV90H/R/OwuuBgfws6XihjUwg9BK4 jyA/nqNuIWn49I2umMJMKsPyZR6rx+FNolk5VOWHhKLjVceNFzWcTMIEqZ+YH3br CrqLZVzlValD/Zwec/RxEACmHtOobj4dwRGADBkD7JgkiQiSJdRdB/rW5wYM0ClP CT8kT15peNycmIcsq0yGM0IRKMhc/IIfHHHnRAvRepDeN/vOVF0hs/3VfQKUK4z2 6WnjxoBS+eusNNxsBex+TrQUuA2JSoNa/BxgBCHX7Ls5ejqqw0U1WzrhscWeLBb8 E8fKYZJ4gefbLWwyyB7iXZElPNLMQXYd1Ys2XEKpC4l+9crKf7/IqX2Lnu/EZNc= =mHic -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- -- docs mailing list docs@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/docs
