-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 On 12/05/10 13:12, Rahul Sundaram wrote: > Hi, > > As you might have noticed, the marketing team has been doing a few > feature profiles covering various new features in Fedora 13, the last > ones remaining are one of Btrfs and SSSD > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Btrfs_in_Fedora_13 > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/SSSD_in_Fedora_13 > > So, take a quick look and let me if you have any suggestions on > improving it. Documentation folks - appreciate you review as well. We > would like to send it out to the press in a couple of days. > > Rahul Hi Rahul, I read the Btrfs interview, and I noted the following: 1. 'So right before doing a big yum update our plugin we'll take a snapshot of the filesystem, now you have two copies of the filesystem, and then yum does its update onto your original volume.' - --I would suggest adding a comma after 'big yum update,' (for readability) and change 'we'll' to 'will' ('we'll' seems to be a typo there). 2. 'How many developers are working on Btrfs full time and from Red Hat? What do they focus on?' - --Either remove 'and' or say 'How many developers from Red Hat are working on Btrfs full time?' 3. 'Is there any features that ZFS has that Btrfs does not at this point?' - --Needs to be: 'Are there any features that ZFS has that Btrfs does not at this point?' I hope this has been helpful. Obviously there might be other things that I missed also. Gerard. -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.10 (GNU/Linux) Comment: Using GnuPG with Fedora - http://enigmail.mozdev.org/ iQEcBAEBAgAGBQJL6zQYAAoJEPBxpN6Nznvb5H4H/R4cPoFc0By8JbS2ZFbO9AjQ F5wp/MIk2+IqbdMwWwMh1++pXVBv3J7GVl28kl9YJW0dov+CkNvUOXmI1T6221vf /O1svR5hFX78BA6hXoR+YtculjtYtROLva0cgmMFGATJaDwnlebzmyEx6PzaRiUn L1QobKOeGzgliHE4nQWKzvNrWWCJa8CgwhvOLuIRGbPSjQ+SGE+RTsXhV6zNps98 qbP/PfvoOgqn2ZFxhrrNy8LCFKNrwBRDGfaIgn8cjfEn+tg5ZdsW3aVJE7hzXzvS TdsOxkGaZFmhsAxgFZzPYETdwLaiaUuSRMFnL+J6iQeFqaFrB+yLOg0z4lpJ390= =+Kfx -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- -- docs mailing list docs@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/docs
