On Wed, May 12, 2010 at 07:04:57PM -0400, Gerard Ryan wrote: > On 12/05/10 13:12, Rahul Sundaram wrote: > > Hi, > > > > As you might have noticed, the marketing team has been doing a few > > feature profiles covering various new features in Fedora 13, the last > > ones remaining are one of Btrfs and SSSD > > > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Btrfs_in_Fedora_13 > > > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/SSSD_in_Fedora_13 > > > > So, take a quick look and let me if you have any suggestions on > > improving it. Documentation folks - appreciate you review as well. We > > would like to send it out to the press in a couple of days. > > > > Rahul > > Hi Rahul, > > I read the Btrfs interview, and I noted the following: > > 1. > 'So right before doing a big yum update our plugin we'll take a snapshot > of the filesystem, now you have two copies of the filesystem, and then > yum does its update onto your original volume.' > > --I would suggest adding a comma after 'big yum update,' (for > readability) and change 'we'll' to 'will' ('we'll' seems to be a typo > there). > > > 2. > 'How many developers are working on Btrfs full time and from Red Hat? > What do they focus on?' > > --Either remove 'and' or say 'How many developers from Red Hat are > working on Btrfs full time?' > > > 3. > 'Is there any features that ZFS has that Btrfs does not at this point?' > > --Needs to be: 'Are there any features that ZFS has that Btrfs does not > at this point?' > > > I hope this has been helpful. Obviously there might be other things that > I missed also. > > Gerard. Gerard, If you have a Fedora account already, you can actually make these edits yourself. The wonderful thing about a wiki is that it encourages collaboration like this directly on the document. You don't need to ask for permission to make improvements. And the changes you make are recorded in a history record, so if there's any problem, it's easy to find and correct it. Thanks for participating and reviewing! -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ Where open source multiplies: http://opensource.com -- docs mailing list docs@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/docs
