Hi Paul, Sorry I managed to miss this email, added a statement in line with what you said in that email. Christian On Tue, 2013-11-26 at 14:42 -0500, Paul W. Frields wrote: > On Tue, Nov 26, 2013 at 12:19:57PM +0100, Christian Fredrik Kalager Schaller wrote: > > Hi everyone, > > Ok, wanted to send out a quick update which includes all the > > sentence/spelling fixes people sent. I also tried clarifying the > > integrated desktop experience item as Lukáš Tinkl suggested. > > > > Only thing I haven't done here is reworked the goals listing as per > > Ryan's suggestion as it would be a bigger job and I am not convinced the > > end result would produce a 'better' text. That said I am open to > > suggestions if someone wants to propose and alternate text/layout to > > this section. > > I would still like a clarification on page 3 that branding, > etc. should come under a framework with the rest of the Fedora > products. That process should be owned by the Fedora Design team. I > was under the impression they're already involved in some surveys to > start laying that out. > > q.v. https://lists.fedoraproject.org/pipermail/desktop/2013-November/008290.html > > -- > Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ > gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 > http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ > The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com
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