On Tue, Nov 26, 2013 at 12:19:57PM +0100, Christian Fredrik Kalager Schaller wrote: > Hi everyone, > Ok, wanted to send out a quick update which includes all the > sentence/spelling fixes people sent. I also tried clarifying the > integrated desktop experience item as Lukáš Tinkl suggested. > > Only thing I haven't done here is reworked the goals listing as per > Ryan's suggestion as it would be a bigger job and I am not convinced the > end result would produce a 'better' text. That said I am open to > suggestions if someone wants to propose and alternate text/layout to > this section. I would still like a clarification on page 3 that branding, etc. should come under a framework with the rest of the Fedora products. That process should be owned by the Fedora Design team. I was under the impression they're already involved in some surveys to start laying that out. q.v. https://lists.fedoraproject.org/pipermail/desktop/2013-November/008290.html -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com -- desktop mailing list desktop@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/desktop
