On Fri, 2009-03-06 at 02:44 -0800, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: > Ian Weller a écrit : > | On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 11:07:38PM -0800, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: > |> Setting in critic mode: > |> Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph? > |> Careful with the widow at the end of last paragraph? > |> Title "Chapter 2: Friends" is hard to read due to similar hue. > Enlighten it > |> might help. > |> > | This is a *mockup*. I'm also extremely picky about em dashes, and we'll > | make sure we use those correctly in the finished book. :D > Blame my prof for torturing me for using hyphen for mockup. Well, it makes things more effective when correct typography is used right from the start (hence why you prof. has been torturing you for hyphens even in mock-ups) ;-) Martin
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