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Ian Weller a écrit :
| On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 11:07:38PM -0800, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote:
|> Setting in critic mode:
|> Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph?
|> Careful with the widow at the end of last paragraph?
|> Title "Chapter 2: Friends" is hard to read due to similar hue.
Enlighten it
|> might help.
|>
| This is a *mockup*. I'm also extremely picky about em dashes, and we'll
| make sure we use those correctly in the finished book. :D
Blame my prof for torturing me for using hyphen for mockup.
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